Shinobi Bonds review

Tobii at 03h04
13
May
2010
Name of the Forum: Shinobi Bonds
Address: Shinobi Bonds
Area's you wish the reviewer to review: One Area | Graphics/Layout
1 Jophy, on 13/05/2010 at 03h05
Sorry, but we don't review categories of forums, we only review areas of forums which includes:

-general
-graphics/design lay out
-others
-language
2 Tobii, on 13/05/2010 at 03h06
Ok. Sorry for the mistake. Graphics/Design Layout please then! ^.^
3 KingOfSports, on 13/05/2010 at 03h14
Tagged and will be completed in a max of 72 hours.
4 KingOfSports, on 13/05/2010 at 23h31
Here is your review:





Shinobi Bonds



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Graphic Design & Layout

  1. Graphics (Score: 15/20):
    Banner
    The banner seems a bit too tall for me. It also seems more like a drawing than an image and the quality could be improved a bit. I think the “Shinobi Bonds” should extend over the entire image instead of just the right side. I would also suggest removed the “Who’s Really Your Friends?” text and moving the “created by” to the bottom right and make it smaller.

    I like the green outer line. It fits well with the rest of the image and it isn’t very distracting.
    Navigation Bar
    These really don’t fit with your forum. They are more of a disco type nav bar. I would suggest a nav bar that represents Naruto or anime in general. It’s also very different from your banner. They don’t match in the least. I’m sure you can find something better by searching in the ForuMotion Gallery.
    Forum Icons
    I’m not quite sure if they relate to Naruto or Anime, but they are just your average forum icons. You could try finding some that relate to your forum to make it seem more relevant, but it’s not necessary.
    'Who Is Online?' Image
    This is a good image, but I think this is too big as well. It does fit with your forum theme as well as your skin/template, but it takes away from the actual statistics. I would suggest either keeping the image the same size and making the text in the stats section bigger or making the image smaller and keeping the text the same size. Another thing I like about this image is the font size. It relates to your forum topic very well.
  2. Forum Layout & Colors (Score: 6/10):
    The colors are extremely inconsistent. There are too many colors in my opinion. There is gray, green, red, black, a lightish green, and blue. I would try to stick with 2 main colors that work well together and then use lighter/darker shades for other things.

    As for the layout, I think that there is too much text/space before you can see any categories or forums. The banner is really large and the text is long. I would suggest either removed the text completely or moving it somewhere else in the forum.

Graphic Design & Layout total :: 21/30

21/30 – 70% – C

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[size=11][u][b]Banner[/b][/u][/size]
The banner seems a bit too tall for me. It also seems more like a drawing than an image and the quality could be improved a bit. I think the “Shinobi Bonds” should extend over the entire image instead of just the right side. I would also suggest removed the “Who’s Really Your Friends?” text and moving the “created by” to the bottom right and make it smaller.

I like the green outer line. It fits well with the rest of the image and it isn’t very distracting.
[size=11][u][b]Navigation Bar[/b][/u][/size]
These really don’t fit with your forum. They are more of a disco type nav bar. I would suggest a nav bar that represents Naruto or anime in general. It’s also very different from your banner. They don’t match in the least. I’m sure you can find something better by searching in the ForuMotion Gallery.
[size=11][u][b]Forum Icons[/b][/u][/size]
I’m not quite sure if they relate to Naruto or Anime, but they are just your average forum icons. You could try finding some that relate to your forum to make it seem more relevant, but it’s not necessary.
[size=11][u][b]'Who Is Online?' Image[/b][/u][/size]
This is a good image, but I think this is too big as well.   It does fit with your forum theme as well as your skin/template, but it takes away from the actual statistics. I would suggest either keeping the image the same size and making the text in the stats section bigger or making the image smaller and keeping the text the same size. Another thing I like about this image is the font size. It relates to your forum topic very well.
[*][b]Forum Layout & Colors (Score: 6/10):[/b]
The colors are extremely inconsistent. There are too many colors in my opinion. There is gray, green, red, black, a lightish green, and blue. I would try to stick with 2 main colors that work well together and then use lighter/darker shades for other things.

As for the layout, I think that there is too much text/space before you can see any categories or forums. The banner is really large and the text is long. I would suggest either removed the text completely or moving it somewhere else in the forum.
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[color=darkred]Graphic Design & Layout total :: 21/30[/color]

[color=limegreen][b][font=Trebuchet MS Bold Italic][size=24] 21/30 – 70% – C  [/font][/b][/size][/color]
 
5 Tobii, on 13/05/2010 at 23h33
Well, this will do just wanted to know. So someone may lock this and tagg this completed.
6 KingOfSports, on 13/05/2010 at 23h35
==> Locked and archived.
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